I thought that overall your roughcut was really good and flowed very well. I think that the lighting in the shots of the boy playing the piano was really effective and fit in well with the feel of the music. However i think the shots showing the boy playing the piano could have been varied a little more as it got quite boring watching the same shot over and over again.
The editing of the footage that is made to look like it is a pencil drawing has worked really well but it seems to be a bit faint and might look more effective if it was a bit darker so that it would show up more.
I think that the video has followed all the genre conventions and sells the artist really well, you've done a really good job :)
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