Group 48 feedback on roughcut

From watching your video we have concluded that your idea is good, you just need to expand on it a little bit more. Your lip syncing and shots of the artists are really well done, but there is quite a lot of the same shot. More variate shots would liven up the video from a views point of view. Also the shots with the white are quite hard to make out, again its a good idea but maybe some expanding upon it would be good.
Hope that helped.