Commentary Feedback.

Good idea of letting your audience know who is who in your group by having their name come up whilst their talking. Linking to other videos which inspired your and ideas was good showing your thinking. Good commentary explaining ideas, planning, etc. and each group member is loud and clear & can be heard.

feedback

Has all the info that it should, could do with a website on the poster, Does promote the artist but can not see the face so still not sure what they look like, this make it more mysterious. Poster and DVD cover all have continuity which link to the images in the video, also same font and colour patten in all.

Feedback on rough cut

Really good, good use of goodwins points - genre wise, the editing cool but i didnt really like how liht the white bit goes, you cant really see the characters. There are many, different and interesting shots, they could be better. i would watch it again but only because of the song not the video. links with the blog. Sells the artist really really well!